I love you so deeply,
I love you so much,
I love the sound of your voice,
And the way that we touch.
I love your warm smile,
And your kind, thoughtfull way,
The joy that you bring,
To my life everyday.
I love you today,
As I have from the start,
And I'll love you forever,
With all of my heart.













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it has great rhythm, too. the only line that has its rhythm off a bit is line 3, i think. 'love the sound of your voice' with no 'i' would fix it. also, thoughtful has one L. just my little 2 cents...
anyway, good job.
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My personal favorite.
Beautifully writtin by the most beautiful person.
Love you angel.
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Well thank you hunny
Love you too
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"For You, I give my heart.
Which has become.
So full of stone.
I shall never.
Use it again."
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