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I Will Love You Forever by ~r3j3ct:iconr3j3ct:





I love you so deeply,
I love you so much,
I love the sound of your voice,
And the way that we touch.
I love your warm smile,
And your kind, thoughtfull way,
The joy that you bring,
To my life everyday.
I love you today,
As I have from the start,
And I'll love you forever,
With all of my heart.
©2003-2009 ~r3j3ct
:iconr3j3ct:

Author's Comments

written about my one and only.. :)

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:icongreyfell:
nice poem, simple and sweet.

it has great rhythm, too. the only line that has its rhythm off a bit is line 3, i think. 'love the sound of your voice' with no 'i' would fix it. also, thoughtful has one L. just my little 2 cents...

anyway, good job. :)
:iconr3j3ct:
hehe thanks.. I wrote that just earlier today.. ive got a few more if you wanna read those too..

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:music: Until The Day I Die, I'll Spill My Heart For You
:iconr3j3ct:
thanx :)

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:music: Until The Day I Die, I'll Spill My Heart For You
:icon-hush:
:+fav:

My personal favorite.

Beautifully writtin by the most beautiful person.

Love you angel.
:)

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:hmm:
:iconr3j3ct:
:)

Well thank you hunny

Love you too :heart:

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:music: Until The Day I Die, I'll Spill My Heart For You
:iconblindhuntress:
aren't significant others wonderful? Your poem is beautiful!!! I love it!
:iconr3j3ct:
Yes yes. And thank you. :)

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"For You, I give my heart.
Which has become.
So full of stone.
I shall never.
Use it again."

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